Monday, March 13, 2006

shark haiku

come close to the shore
where . . . there, wade in the shallows
little deeper now. . . .

4 Comments:

Blogger ryan said...

Impeccable spacing on the ellipses Demetri.

13:01  
Blogger demetri said...

shark toothbite marks . . . three teeth . . . then four. . . .

15:32  
Blogger becca said...

hahaha who said nobody cares about grammar anymore? can i use this haiku & comment string with my comp students???

16:53  
Blogger demetri said...

if you feel we would be neither scaring nor perverting the young, then go for it

17:04  

Post a Comment

<< Home